Thursday, June 25, 2009

Where Clouds Play - Redone

I was not happy with the first draft so I went at it again. While I think there is a distinct improvement I'm not really sure how I feel about the piece. I can't decide whether it's over done or not...


Aaron Mercer said...

I'm afraid I think I liked it better before. The second one is too busy and completely loses its focal point on the characters. Also, the idea of a place where clouds play does not say "forest" to me. The mountaintop felt like the more appropriate setting.

Also, the color scheme of the first was inviting and friendly, while the second is more magical. I don't think magic was the right way to go with it.

kwistin said...

Agh! I love these! I love that the girl's face is buried in a cloud, giving it a very human element, yet focusing on the clouds as well. It's like, "insert yourself here! Remember when you were little? Why don't you play with clouds now? Huh? HUH?!" that.

I love the concept...what was it for?